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Is The Common Core Too Much For The Common Man?

For presidential hopefuls, 2011 is the year of campaigning. In the New York teaching world, thanks to the new Common Core standards, 2011 is the official Year of the English Teacher.

That’s right, it’s all about reading to identify flaws in others’ argument and writing airtight arguments of one’s own. Instead of the onus of literacy living principally in the English department, now all subjects at my school are expected to work together toward more coherent development of ideas in our students’ writing. Walk into any classroom in my school over the next couple of weeks, and chances are you will be hearing about paragraph structure, thesis statements, the use of evidence, or the difference between fact and opinion.

While it’s edifying to iron out my learning objectives with colleagues across the disciplines, the critical value of the Common Core Standards came to my attention while watching the Republican presidential last week. Rick Perry was asked to speak about his position on immigration, and he did. Kind of. After taking a hard line against anyone who would usurp America’s resources without due contribution, he went onto emphasize his pride in his own immigrant roots. He talked about how hard his Italian grandfather and father had worked to give him the opportunities he’s had in his life. He talked about how vital immigrants are to America’s prosperity. He closed with a sanguine (but apparently unmemorable) relish meant to further inspire American pride in anyone who hadn’t yet been swept away by his passion.

There was no connection, however, between his nostalgia and his original point: that we need to limit the number of immigrants entering our country without documentation, or make sure that those who do enter are properly taxed. In a national debate, the governor of Texas had just earned himself a 50 percent on one of my 10th-grade writing assignments.

Newt Gingrich took some weak jabs at our ability to educate our children — newly immigrated or otherwise — but he, too, failed to provide evidence. Both men relied entirely on passion, sound bites, and personal narrative to rally their audience. I thought about the thousands of Republican Americans watching and wondered how many of them would be swept away by whatever personal commonalities they had with these men. Equally, I thought of my hard-headed liberal friends and wondered how many Democrats or Independents would simply scoff at these candidates’ positions on immigration but miss the opportunity to scoff at their lack of evidence. How did men who can’t support their arguments ever get to run for president?

Lest I seem too partisan, allow me to examine President Obama’s recent jobs speech, delivered earlier this month.  In it, the president tries to speak to the hardworking, middle-class American who wants to provide for his or her family and enjoy a healthy retirement. Like Perry, he romanticizes the American who believes hard work pays off. He then posits the American Jobs Act as a lifesavor for these poor, dissatisfied Americans. He even gives evidence for exactly what the Jobs Act will do: provide support to small businesses and more jobs for teachers and construction workers. But he doesn’t explain why the American dream has been threatened, or why this particular bill is going to save it. He doesn’t explain why his evidence supports his thesis. Obama, too, would earn an unsatisfactory grade in my class.

In a country that has become complacent with little evidence and sweeping, passionate statements, a politician need only hook us with flowery rhetoric and then propose a plan with a respectable number of specific figures included. Why would happen if students at the top of their game in the Common Core Standards scratch beneath these simple layers of facts? Perhaps, over time, a new set of standards can truly create a more critical voter population. Perhaps it will produce people more of us want to vote for.

I don’t know that the Common Core standards will give us better candidates, though I do hope to see some more thought-provoking debates from future generations. I can’t help but start my year, though, with a little more confidence in the value of my curriculum. If my students can distinguish facts from opinions, if they can build their own arguments based on hard evidence and refute those whose evidence is inappropriate to its thesis, they will be ahead of several presidential candidates.

  • http://www.dianasenechal.com Diana Senechal

    If “evidence” were required for every argument, John Stuart Mill’s On Liberty would be toast. But it is not.

    I am saying this not to defend Gingrich or Perry but to point to different kinds of arguments. There are arguments made from insight and wisdom; they must be recognized for what they are and evaluated on their own terms.

  • http://bubbler.wordpress.com/ Mark

    You point out an interesting and promising utility of the CCSS: the literacy standards are easily converted directly into a rubric!

  • Pconrad

    But . . . doesn’t the real story on the Common Core and the Common Man lie in the intense suspicion with which the Tea Parties and their sympathizers regard any program for nation-wide standards or curriculum?

  • il flerpolo

    Right.  What’s essential to persuasive writing is strong reasoning.  The idea that “evidence,” as commonly understood (i.e., “facts,” which usually manifest themselves as statistics), is essential to persuasive writing is drilled into students in high school, and they have a tough time moving past that idea in college and beyond.  

    Ironically, from a practical perspective, “evidence” is not very persuasive at all, since many if not most readers and listeners zone out when “studies” and statistics are invoked.  This is partly because evidence is boring.  But it’s also because people recognize that statistics are commonly used to buttress weak arguments.  See, e.g., Mark Twain’s various statements on the matter.

  • Tiredofyou

    But you use statistics in everyone of your posts. So you use statistics to buttress your weak arguements.Your evidence is boring. You never pay attention and what do you know about what is drilled into students in high school? You know it all but you know nothing.

  • http://www.dianasenechal.com Diana

    There’s still more. I’d say that there’s a third kind of persuasive writing: arguing through conscientious eloquence–that is, language that reflects both experience and passion and casts a question in a new light for the reader. Mill’s colleague and close friend Alexander Bain criticised the reasoning in Mill’s treatise on liberty yet praised it all the same.

    So there are at least three kids of persuasive writing: persuasion with evidence (see Seneca’s “On the Shortness of Life” for a wonderful example), persuasion through reasoning (for instance, Augustine’s reasoning about memory in book X of the Confessions, or Socratese on justice in the Republic), and persuasion through conscientious eloquence. There are combinations of these, of course. And then there’s persuasion through trickery, manipulation, and so forth, but those should be taught for recognition, not for emulation.

    Since we are placing more emphasis than before on nonfiction, it would be good to recognize its possibilities.

  • http://www.dianasenechal.com Diana

    Typo in last comment: Socrates, not Socratese.

  • Michael Fiorillo

    I’d like to suggest that the so-called Common Core Standards henceforth be called by their rightful name, the Gates/Microsoft-Pearson Standards, in honor of the purportedly non-profit entities that are financing their creation.

    No one should too worked up or committed to this latest false panacea. First of all, the standards are inseparable from the frequent tests that are to accompany them, the purpose of which is to homogenize instruction and eliminate tenure and seniority. In practice, the tests are the curriculum, and their creators fool themselves if they think otherwise (although since TFAers are disproportionately represented in their production, my guess is that most know full well their ultimate purpose).

    Additionally, in the event President Obama is not re-elected, this curriculum will immediately follow into oblivion every other educational fad and forced march of the past twenty years. What will remain, however, is a further destabilized, monetized and anti-democratic public education system.

  • Hilary Lustick

    Here is an article documenting the partnership between Gates and Pearson-Microsoft, although it seems to claim that this partnership happened after the common core had been designed.  http://www.nytimes.com/2011/04/28/education/28gates.html

  • Michael Fiorillo

    Thank you for the link, Hilary.

    While the “creation” of the Microsoft-Pearson Standards is nominally attributed to The National Governors Association (NGA) and the Council of Chief State School Officers (CCSSO), their development and implementation is being financed by Gates/Microsoft, among many other parties with a financial interest in their creation and use.

    As Lynne Munson, Executive Director of the Common Core (which revealingly is a trademarked term, suggesting the commercial mindset driving it) has written, “The Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation’s support of the (curriculum) maps was central to their creation” (http://commoncore/maps/about/acknowledgements).

    The creation and implementation of these standards is inseparable from the current political economy of education in the country, which is now dominated by the neoliberal model of privatization, monetization of sectors that at one time had a less than total subservience to the market economy (health care, education, other public services and infrastructure) and the fungibility of labor. It should never be forgotten that all the hypocritical and fatuous rhetoric about “the kids,”  ”Children First” “the civil rights movement of our time” and every other focus group-tested slogan is belied by the fact that, in the minds of those pushing these false panaceas, the purpose of education is little more than creating future units of human capital, who are to receive training that will prepare them for their future status as powerless and  interchangeable members of the service proletariat. As I have written elsewhere (http://nyceducator.com/2011/01/false-premises-false-promises-corporate.html), the purported “knowledge economy” of the twenty-first century is a fallacy, to be limited to a tiny slice of the population, for reasons that have everything to do with investment decisions, not “teacher quality.”

    While we all can disagree about the details of the standards themselves- personally, as an ESL and English teacher who already uses a great deal of non-fiction, I think they reveal their anti-humanist bias with their subordination of literature – the milieu from which they have emerged is without question one of (so-called) free market fundamentalism. 

    One of the terrible ironies of this current Dark Age in education is how, privateers and opportunists aside, smart and otherwise compassionate people have been entranced by the siren song of corporate ed deform. But there is reason for hopefulness: at this very moment, students and teachers in Chile are struggling to throw off the yolk of a privatized, neoliberal educational regime that was imposed at the point of a gun in the aftermath of the fascist coup of 9/11/73, a privatized system that was designed and implemented by the acolytes of Milton Friedman and the Chicago School of economics. Here in NYC, new teachers are waking up to the vicious deceptions and policies underpinning corporate ed deform, as they see how they are arbitrarily being denied tenure in ever-increasing numbers. Hopefully, as they join parents and students in resistance, as the hostile takeover of the public schools collapses under the weight of its own corruption, and as this polluted tide withdraws to its next investment opportunities, we can begin to have honest discussions about how to serve the needs (academic and otherwise) of children and the communities in which they live.

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